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CCTV || The reason Chinese government block sites that share diverse ideas is because, in order for the people in China to think how the Chinese government wanted. On the other hand, CCTVs are one of the best inventions that man kind has ever made. It was made to record the past and use to support statements.However as the number of CCTVs increased, people felt like they were being watched, thinking that their individual rights were being violated, turning out to be like the 1984 society. ||
 * Topic sentence || Information should be made accessible to a certain limit. ||
 * Elaboration || All things need to be limited to control its power. Information can be a medicine but also can be poisonous if it is overly excessive. ||
 * Example/Evidence || Internet Censorship in China
 * Explanation || Internet Censorship in China is among the most stringent in the world.Censoring the Internet means information is examined in order to delete what is considered objectionable.
 * Link Sentence || Limited amount of information should be proposed to an individual,but multitude of information can violate the right of an individual. ||