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Should there be limits to our access to information?
 * **Topic sentence** || == This is the main idea that you want to make about the topic. It should state in one sentence what your paragraph is going to be about.  ==

Access to some information should be limited. ||
 * **Elaboration** || == Write one or two sentences explaining your topic sentence.  ==

Personal, or government information should be limited, but some information should be accessible. There is information that affects individuals, but also helps our society grow. ||
 * **Examples/Evidence** || == Provide at least two pieces of specific evidence that support your topic sentence.  ==

For example, if people knew what laws the government were making, they can harshly protest against it, which will cause chaotic. Another example is, a person should not be able to know, whether one individual holds a disease, or a handicap. ||
 * **Explanation/Analysis** || == This is a crucial part of the paragraph which requires some thought. Here, you need to explain how the evidence/examples you provided support your main idea in the topic sentence. This should be 2-4 sentences in length.  ==

People should not be able to access information that affects an individual. Knowing how many people in our country has a disease, or a handicap is fine because it is not affecting someone directly. Also, government information should be not accessible. They should be kept secretive because for example, if Korea was planning to attack a country, and someone heard about this, then they can tell the country's government, which might cause them to attack Korea first. ||
 * **Link sentence** || == This sentence summarizes your paragraph and links back to the main idea in the topic sentence. When writing an essay, the role of the this sentence is to link the paragraph back to your thesis.  ==

Information should be available for the world, for knowledge, and growth in our community, but some information should be kept limited for the good. ||