Sa+Bin+Kim+G+Block+Information

Make corrections or editions. Speak to me if you have any sort of question. Topic Sentence: The question whether information should be completely controlled was the debate that lasted a long time, however, I believe that information should be limitedly limited. Elaboration: Not all should be shown since it could damage a group physically or an individual mentally such as a military information of a country or as simple as a single photo of an individual. This does not mean that all information should be blocked since information helps us develop and not fall into ignorance. Examples/Evidence: Ignorance caused by lack of information was the Dark Ages when the Europeans were stupid. The potential danger of over-information is that country's military information was slipped and the country was taken over by another country who had the counter weapon Explanation/Analysis: Under-information was spread by believing too much in the god. Everybody did not think enough and only hoped for the next world which made the lack of productivity. Productivity, as everybody knows, is the most important element in new discoveries and hope, lack of hope cut the circulation which improved economy. Secretive information such as embarrassing photos or the force which needed to puncture a plate of armor can be used to blackmail or attack a person or a group of people Link Sentence: These are the reasons why too little information and too much informations are very dangerous and will even make us fear the web cloud (technical term for all the information in the internet) in the future which will reduce the productivity since information cannot travel around
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