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Topic Sentence: There definitely should be limits for amounts of information available for people. Elaboration: There definitely should be limits for amounts of information available for people because first, individuals hold their rights to protect and keep their privacy. Second, people should live their lives feeling safe. If your private information is to be known by everyone, people can used those information to blackmail and threaten each other. Examples / Evidence: If there are no limits for amounts of information available for people, it can be harmful for the society. For example, if I had cancer and I was hiding it from my parents to not disappoint them and if someone knew about me having cancer, he/she can use that to blackmail me. He or she can threaten me saying that they will inform my parents about my huge secret. Also, currently there are laws that are limiting and stopping other people from attempting to get access to others' privacy. Explanation / Analysis: If someone knew about my huge secret having cancer and told my parents about it, I would be very upset. Just by imagining of me getting cancer I get headaches; if my parents are very old at the time and if they figure out about my body conditions, they will get extremely upset and fail to live longer. And that would be a terrible thing to be done by other to you. Even currently people are trying to prevent people from accessing other people's private information; which proves that there definitely should be limits for amounts of information available for people. Link Sentence: Because no limits for amounts of information available can be harmful for the society and because even currently, there are laws that are preventing people from accessing other people private information, there definitely should be limits for amounts of information available for people.

There definitely should be limits for amounts of information available for people.
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|| If someone knew about my huge secret having cancer and told my parents about it, I would be very upset. Just by imagining of me getting cancer I get headaches; if my parents are very old at the time and if they figure out about my body conditions, they will get extremely upset and fail to live longer. And that would be a terrible thing to be done by other to you. Even currently people are trying to prevent people from accessing other people's private information; which proves that there definitely should be limits for amounts of information available for people.
 * == Elaboration == || There definitely should be limits for amounts of information available for people because first, individuals hold their rights to protect and keep their privacy. Second, people should live their lives feeling safe. If your private information is to be known by everyone, people can used those information to blackmail and threaten each other. ||
 * == Examples/Evidence == || If there are no limits for amounts of information available for people, it can be harmful for the society. For example, if I had cancer and I was hiding it from my parents to not disappoint them and if someone knew about me having cancer, he/she can use that to blackmail me. He or she can threaten me saying that they will inform my parents about my huge secret. Also, currently there are laws that are limiting and stopping other people from attempting to get access to others' privacy. ||
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 * == Link Sentence == || Because no limits for amounts of information available can be harmful for the society and because even currently, there are laws that are preventing people from accessing other people private information, there definitely should be limits for amounts of information available for people. ||